juan:

please if you het this tell me ok. That’s all I want to know. When people say that it makes them cry its not because it makes them think of their loved ones

Unknown:

this it soooo sweet i thought of matt when i read it
i love him so much and this said it all

jackie:

Wow i thought is was so sweet i made me think of someone that i rlly like and how much he actually means to me

joanna:

very najsssssssssssssssss :)))

Derik Gillis:

It was a good poem could have used more of a ryme scheme,But the poem made sense that's what made it a Good poem.
It would be good for chilidren and adults to read because its very understandable and simple but not that simple.

Alice:

its a really good poem

callum:

I thought it was relly good and you should keep
writing them
and juan is speeking a load of rubbish, i thought it was relly good and that you shoud keep writing them, juanis speeking rubbish and
i would like to see her write better 7 out of 10

***********:

**wow omg this is soo sweet **

Tina:

this poem made me think of Matt cuz hes the
only thing that this christmas is worth this poem
say's it all i think of it now and then!!!this year he
as made my chirstmas the greatest evere by given
me his love i love you Matthew and this poem is
great

anthony:

its coo i like it maybe you should give this one to the children that don't have a family and make them feel batter

chelsea:

that waz great...i though of my manfriend aaron when i waz reading it cause i love him and that poem says it all..keep writing

Sandra:

The poem was beautiful. If all people were and thought what you did it would be so great. Merry Christmas

moomaa:

i think its very funky yes poopoo

gary:

hi my name is gary . sexy boi. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

poem is like so huny buny , i like coco!!lol


plz call me boobaa
07789476294

love you xxx

kat:

it's ok, a little cliches though

Emaly M.:

yea I would agree the Juan is saying ugly things your good keep typing and forget the hateful comments.

Bob:

This is a really beautiful poem
!!!

rebecca:

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RiverCityKween:

Very nice sentiment in this "short story" for, that's what its. It has no rhyme or form recognizeable as poetry. Keep writing, though, it will come to you.

Ifthekar:

its a very GOOD poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Joseph Beer:

I would like to say that I think who ever wrote this peom knows that love is the best thing that could have ever happened to anyone and I think that this peom was probably one of the only one's I can actually say that I relate to so thank you I thought the peom was outstanding

sheema:

so bad and boring pls changed and create something different and interesting maybe funny or joy type pls....im open pls don't mistake me

Emily:

don't listen to Juan ! this poem is really nice!!! I LOVE IT!
Keep on Writing them!!

Kellie:

HEY I LIKE THE POEM AND I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP RIGHTING AND don't LISEN TO ALL THE PEOPLE that's SAYING BAD THINGS ABOUT YOUR POEM. I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITNG THESE POEMS.

jeremiah :

wow i'm so glad that someone has written a good
poem on christmas thank you so much for writeing
this i givve it five stars!!!!!!!!!

keyona:

that was one of the best poems i read Im gonna share this poem with my family and friends. Think you for leting evry one in the world read this poem and to share.

kd:

i loved this poem

unknown:

this poem is so good. it made me cry. don't even listen to what that juan man says because i don't even think he can write a poem. he is just jealous. ne wys keep on writing and Im sure you will have a bright future in writing poems.

jordan:

its one of the best poems I've ever read

JASMINE:

THAT WAS THE best poem I've EVER HEARD IN MY INTIRE LIFE AND I ALMOST BRUNG TEARS TO MY EYES

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