Tiffany:

I have to say I know your pain... My dad was the same,
of course as his daughter,
Very well chosen words for this type of poem, and I
Applaud you!

Scarlet:

It broke my heart! Unfortunately my mom makes me feel the same…

GErAlDiNa tAmAyO:

Thiz poem iz hella tight.......
keep up the tight work
~ ~
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Juanita:

This poem really tugs at my heart strings, it really
represents exactly what my sons father did to him! I
don't think any man who cannot be a dad even
really deserves a child so precious and special as
the one I've. The way I see it these children
are better off anyway, as a mom we will
provide our children with all the love and
nourishment they need to survive anyway!

Rochana:

This is a good letter to the father's out here who just walk out of there son's life I'm facing the same issue right now with my son and it hurts

Bethany:

i know how you feel exceot im a girl but the day i
was born my dad left my mom he sed he
didn't want n/e more kids so I never got to meet
him and the worst part is I have brothers and sister
out there that I've never meet because I don't
know there names. So believe me I know where your
coming from. i'm missing half of my family because
of him I've family I will never know and it hurts
especially because my whole life I've wanted to
meet him . I don't think a kid should grow up with out
a father it's not right I hope thing turn out ok for you

kayla:

yeah man i kno how you feel...my dad ran out on my mom and he still manages to get by knowing that he left his two kids behind

gabriele:

um this poem says just how i fill about my dad right now.
Im a 15 yr old girl and its hard.
thank you for this poem!

gw:

hey i fill your pain but from my mom.
very well worded.
it was very moving and good also besides the fact im a girl.

Latresha:

That poem if filled with such love and experiene. But I haven't had an earthly father until two months ago. I've had a heavenly father all my life and so can you if you just receive him. Weaping may indure for a Night but Joys Gonna come in the Morning. May God the father bless and keep you for the rest of your days!!!!!!!!!

Latresha:

very well done!!!!!
God is the source of all your Blesssing
(talents)
Keep him First

jessica:

it's a nice latter...and i agree... except am a gril..
my dad left us
because he didn't want to take the responsibity of
my sister and brother and of course myself..i just
hope he dosen't do the same to his daughtet he just
had a couple of months ago.

gaby101:

I kno how you feel, becuz my dad ran out of my
moms and my life just when i was born!! The
sad thing is that i still wonder who he is!!! I think
that any dad that has a child would at least talk
to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nikki:

I thought your poem was really good, like many other kids my dad left my mom, me and my older sister when I was three Im now 17 and havent seen him since the day he walked out on us. I used to miss him but I've realized that my life is better without him im 17 in college and I have too jobs….and I owe all of my success to my mom who is also my best friend she raised all four of us kids by herself I like to think of her as a hero…I think its great that you can "vent" by writing just don't let your anger get the best of you its not your dad who will help you achieve your dreams its all in you and it seems as if you have a great talent that will take you far in life!! Good luck……

Destiny:

I can also relate to your poem becasue my dad was an asshole too
I've grown into a very wonderful person
Im now an 18 yr old stong female and I am very happy that I can to
this site to read this clap on the keep speaking your words and good luck!!!!!!!

maria bradshaw:

i juss wanted to say this was a really touching poem you have talent

tiffany:

I fell for you this year my dad sould me ot for money. It hurts, but what they do to you will come back to them in the end. Don't give up hope.

laura:

i loved your poem... i love to write to and that was really a moving poem

Fu!ken Sweet :

OUCH!!!that brought a tear to my eye,
i also cry and wonder why.
My dad left me 3 years ago
I WONDER what made him go
thank you 4 the amazing poem you wrote
if this was a competition ud have my vote
im a 16 year old broken young lady
he brought me up from a small baby
just to dispose of me like a piece of trash
maybe 4 the extra lump of cash
if you want to talk im here 4 you
and every1 else from the fatherless crew

a:

im so sorry....i think your poem is so good (said) its ok ever think will get beter as time goes goodbye

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