Nat: | ||
Wow, this was a really awesome poem, it makes you think and it makes you want to give that man your spare change even though like you said he might spend it on drugs or booz this was a really good poem, thank you for sharing it! I truly loves it. -nat |
Min Min: | ||
Yes, it's a really great poem I appreciate much. Jone's writing started to show its depth and maturity in this poem. |
GErAlDiNa tAmAyO: | ||
O my god this poem iz so deep i love thiz poem......itz so real it makes you think itz reality..… |
Kaela: | ||
This poem is really deep. Makes you look at reality in a different way and understand things you didn't before. Awsome talent. |
KrazyPsycho: | ||
wow dude that poem was like totaly deep this was the last poem i read for that night and i had a dream and put myself in the man you described shoes and i woke up in terror and just ahd to post it up......man that's a really good poem i will think of it next time i pass a homeless man at the bryn mayr train station in chicago......thank you |
Andria: | ||
youre words are so deep and true everyone should listen to them they are so touching beautiful and moving |
danielle: | ||
that's really deep and good. i love the eaning and what your saying, your right!! |
usako: | ||
deep. |