i like:

that's deep

ian Short:

It's a pretty tight poem I like it

Amanda:

i really like your peom! i would love to hear more! i worte poems myself and i would love to share some! Amanda

Denise:

I really like the way you write. Its really insparational.
you got good talent. I like to write but I find how you
write and the way you do it motivating. You must
Be really motivated. I only write when Im depressed
Or motivated. Well I like your Work

cassandra bissoon:

Wow Im in the same kind of perdicament

Jonell:

wow. that was beautiful! i wish i was able to write like that!

abigail:

you right really good poetry!

malissa :

hey i think these poems are really great and just
keep up the great work.

danielle:

i love that poem! omg your a good writer. i wish i could help you. we r just the same

Brandy:

wow-that's deep, it's really good and nicely
written. i can tell you put alot of thought in to it.
keep writing. *Brandy*

Cherlyn:

What a good poem has you write !!But A Bad point is your..........................Grammar mistake it should be : Travelled thru the night
just you and me with the moon overhead.But you wrote Travelled thru the night
just me and you
with the moon overhead.

Cherlyn:

maybe i was wrong cause you are a writer !!Ur granmmer must be exellent..........

Min Min:

When you write poems grammar is not the most important thing since writing poems is a very creative job (I didn't mean poor grammar though) There are other points the poet needs to balance other than grammar after initial creation. However the comment is appreciated I suppose. The poet will be more likely to take the comment as a positive advice by what I know about the poet. Long time no talk, Jones. Happy New Year!

Tawny:

Dang boi
you´ve got style
lovein that

Trina:

Too deep! Im going through something that describes the situation perfectly. Would love to read more of your poems

waverele:

i loved it that was a good poem great job

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