Ginna:

This is very inspirational.... i lost my dad when i was 10 he died of a heart attack... im 14 now and this poem is very warming to here..... thank you Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays

alyssa:

hey i lost the trust from my dad after he left us and i think that its really great of you to still admire your dad while hes there for you.but im only 14 so i might get that same trust you share with your dad.

Kim:

this poem is way to short you need to learn how to write a poem

Jennifer :

I would just like to know did you write that poem to
soneone that was alive or passed on. Because
my dad passed away about 4 months ago and it
went pretty well with what Im going through
I am 16 years old and just lost my dad and I just wanted to tell you that I really liked you poems

Aprile-Jo:

my dad just died about a year ago and I love how
you write your poems you're a very sweet person and
Im glad that you feel the same way about your
dad as I do myne! My dad was my everything and I
miss him a lot and I love this poem! Well got to go
e-mail me or something!
Aprile Jo Lynn Bohm/ Russell

Aprile-Jo:

okay KIM i think that you say somthing like that maybe you need to lose your dad
you are very disrespectful! you need to reaspect a lil more Im only 15 and I lost my dad
about 6 months ago and you need to realize your
issues instead bring other people down you are selfish
email me at kiles_girl_1-8-05@hotmail.com I will be
waiting too. Aprile Jo
aka
A-jay

kate:

i like your poem but there is some think wrong i think you need 2
write 1 4 people that h8 there dad i h8 mine cuz he hit my bro so i kicked him in his balls and we ran
so write 1 about not beening mean but a way a person could feel about there dad like me im11 kate xxxxxx

kate:

if you wont my addie its kaite11@hotmail.co.uk

amber :

hey you did a good job but i don't like it because i do not know
my dad so what ever

Fly:

ok hunny you are so retarted to write this poem…it don’t even sound right…it sounds like you like your dad…gross.. And anyway you have no idea what its like to lose a dad.. My dad died when I was 1 and I never had anyone but my drunk mom and NEVER home step dad.. So you really need to watch what you are saying… …you shouldn’t write poems ANYMORE hunny…

raychel:

Ilove your poem you done well on this poem. So keep on writing poems and you well be great.
lol Raychel

DIEDRE:

YOW MI LOVE MI DADA LIKE WOW AND YOU GO SAY DIS AGAIN MAKE MI LOVE IM TO death PEACE OUT

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