Heather:

This poem is so touching, maybe i should read it to my boyfriend to see how much he really cares about me...I honestly think we are gonna be breaking up really soon!!!

Dasanie:

Hey, i just wanted you to know that i love your poem.I can really relate to it.
i think that you are a good poet.keep it up!

sara:

Its the exact same way i feel and this is the prefect poem to show this and great JOB!

Chantelle:

i think this poem is deep its expresses me, im crying right now

Stacey:

I thought that this was a beautiful meaningful poem, and where Im at right now in my life with love I can so relate to it!

Syn:

I cut to feel.
To feel what's real.
I cut to feel.
I hate my life.

^- That's what I just read. Kill yourself already.

klo:

My pain. It controls.
It controls my soul.
You cannot understand.
As I run my hand.
Through the land.
Cutting.
Wrists.
Blood.
Sorrow.

--This is my PAIN. No one UNDERSTANDS.

Please suicide.

Syn:

God, klo. that's beautiful. I feel your sorrow.

Brittany:

I really like your poem I can truly relate to it and I know just how you feel and keep the good work up.

Savannah Broussard:

This poem is the best of the best..It reminds me of how I feel about this man I really love but he don't feel the same way about me..He's not like other men..Alot of people told me it just wasn't meant to be and there's nothin I could do to change him..And it hurts me alot to know that..It feels like a knife was shoved right into me and into my heart and someone just ripped it right out of me..It's like a part of me is missing and it's also like as if I never existed..

aguss:

i feel so idetificated
this is a lovely poem
daniel
i love you
much to much
imposible for me
imposible for you to see
how much you mean to me
love you till the end .
agusss

Jess:

this is touching n i understand your pain and confusion, Im
goint to sho this one to my bf, n hopefully it will b a wakeup call.
thank you heaps your a great writer xo

Vanessa:

This poem is exactly how I feel and how its
in my love life, It really touches me, if only my
boyfriend read this then maybe I would'nt
be so quite around him . yeah this is a great poem
all of you that read this comment should read the
poem

jemimah:

yuo poem is so class.
its shows how some1 hurt u.and hurting inside.i can relate to it by how much Im hurting in side from my mom not even listen 2 me or being there

kasie:

well....i love poems and i really love the ones that i relate to!!
i relate to this poem so much right now in my life...this poem is great!!!

adrienne:

i understand how you feel,
im actuallie goin thru wit it now..
i might show da mani like bout diz
mayb he'll understand..
(of course ima put props 2 u)

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