EILEEN MAE:

I lyk dis poem very much relate me

shelby:

i like this poem how it talks about losing a friend and how touching its! its a very good poem and it helps you relate to things like that! it really shows wut it feels like 2 lose a good friend and how hurtful it can be! thank you for sharing wut a nice poem

jennifer:

You can write that's awesome!

Nancy:

I so enjoyed this poem....it was as if I had written it myself..the closeness of best friends...and something that brings separation . The separation came between me and my best friend shortly after we had both gotten married. Fortunately, we reconnected and I was looking at your poem as an inspiration to write one to her...thank you for your inspiration...and hope you reconnect!

myehia:

when i read this
poem god all i could think about was my best
that i lost.she was my world! i loved her
so much! and i could never really explain how
i felt untell i read this. i hate thinking about
her. its like if i don't want to feel the pain. i wish
she knew! so to you who wrote this. thank you!

gabi:

This poem is off the chain!!!!
wow I loved it.
and I fill you girl!!!
love gabi

Cynthia:

This is a great poem!! It reminds me of my best friend.

Amy:

Wow, this is such a good poem! My best friend and i are going through a hard time right now, so i hope we finish our journey! And you too!!

sarah:

this poem is loving and touchimg it reminds of my best friend she past away 2yrs.ago

ELIZABETH HOT CHICK:

"THE JOURNEY OF TWO best friends"
OH MY,THIS POEM REMINDS ME OF ME AND
MY best friend SO MUCH YOU HAVE DONE A
WONDERFUL,MORE THAN GREAT JOB-
WRITING THIS POEM YOU HAVE A GOOD
TALENT SO PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD
WORK : ) HALLA

Sandra :

Your poem is very beautiful Danielle and it touched me very, very much. See Im only thirteen and I've already lost a very close friend. She didn't die but she was in trouble, so I did what any best friend would do, I tried to help her. Then I did something very stupid and on the day of my birthday they took her away from me. She was practically a sister to me, she was my soul, she was my everything! She was all I had and all I could depend on. She helped me when I was struggeling and when I was feeling lot's and lot's of pain! Then when she left, more and more problems came! Now I learned so much from my mistakes and realized I should think before I talk. thank you so much for even writing this. Just from this poem yuo are my idle. I hope someday I can become a poet just like you !

Amber:

that's such a nice poem! its perfect for the occasion its my friends b-day and i moved away from her 4 years ago and we have been friends since we were 3!! thank you for writing it!!

Gabriella:

This poem is of the chain...It remainds me of my
old skool wen i left every body behind danm i felt
HORIBLE!! becuz it waz not so esay to take them
of my mind and i still cry for my bestest friend
Milenka we bean friends scence we were in kinder
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

courtney:

i thought this poem was really extraordinary!!!! i loved it.

ann:

oh my god! your poem is very very cute...!!!!
its so heart-touching!
i really love it...though me and my best friend havent encountered that partings,
we never ended up in that kind of separation....!
hahahah!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)

tori rhodes:

I really loved tis poem it brought tears to my eyes it remineds me ofmy best friend and I.

Lam:

tis poem show life to the past
tis peom show how your feeling last
you are the blueof the sky
because you have a special eye

i see it and you know it
it's like we were together in a pit

you know how much love
as everytime i knew the sky turn blue

ChAnTeL:

hEy nIgGA tHAt PoEm iS maD HoT

silvia:

omg that poem was so moving it reminds
me of my friend. that poem was awsom don't stop
writing

kayla maturino:

This explained the friendship i once had and when i
read it i began to cry. it touched my heart in so many
ways i couldnt imagen. so good work on writeing this
you get a 10.

kayla maturino:

This explained the friendship i once had and when i
read it i began to cry. it touched my heart in so many
ways i couldnt imagen. so good work on writeing this
you get a 10.

reylinie:

i noe how you feel dars da same thing dat happened to me nd my best friend dat noe i miss him so much
::::'(

sweet_meow:

the poem is so sad...
it hit me...
i got scared... it might happen to me too..

Suzy:

This poem made me cry! My best friend Kaymon whom i only met this year is moving, and that poem seemed to discribe us. even though we've only known each other a year, it seems like it's lasted a lifetime

MJ:

When I read this poem, I never knew what I should feel. But there's a pain inside me that came in to me. I've lost my best friend for a second time and it's really a trauma to me. This poem seems like written for all the folks who have lost their bessy and that still cannot accept and face the reality. thank you very much to the writter. You did a very good one! Keep it up!

Victoria:

i love this poem it talks about what its like to lose a friend just like me.
here is a poem I wrote.Once In A While

Once in awhile you find a friend
who's your friend right from the start.
Once in a while the friendship's so strong
it really warms your heart.

Once in a while that friendship lasts
your whole lifetime through.
It only happens once in awhile,
like it happened with me and you.

Tawa:

<3Beautiful!<3

Diedre Elliott:

this poem sound really nice you touch by the words you say may GOD continue to give you strenght and blessing to write more poem

ericka:

i like your poem!!!
it's very nice!!!
goodluck!!

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