Andrew:

If Jake is a real person, im sure he would feel disgraced by the poor writing, and lack of true sentiment.

Jodi:

Do NOT listen to the last comment by such an emotionaless, insensitive person. Your poem is beautiful, and Im sorry for the loss of your friend. Poetry is personal, and the words should not matter, the grammer means nothing, its what is inside the poem itself that counts. Good work!

Frankie:

I'm guessing that Jake was a pet and not a friend...either that or you have freaky furry faced friends that like to lick you? either way the sentiment is sweet but the poetry needs work. Im very sorry for the loss of your pet. I hope that you don't take this as an insult….i was moved enough by your poetry to reply. I think that maybe you are young and your poetry has space to improve. Best Wishes, Frankie, Manchester England

Karla:

OH MY GOSH!! POOR JAKE!!
this makes me soo sad!!
oh my gosh
that would be one of the worst days of my life
to see my best friend
most loyal and warm-loving frend
floating dead in the pool
i kno i may sound like a fool
cuz im so animal loving and frendly
but i cannot help it
i LOOOVE animals
and if i had one it would be onof the worst dayz
of my life too... to see it dead
but life goes on
so just try and look ahead :\

stacy:

ouch that's pretty sad but iz jake a dog or cat i cannot tell i guess cat well any way its sad so yea ouch

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