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Angela:

Jillian--
I've been looking for a poem lately to express how I've been feeling...
apparently, I can't write one that says what I need it to say....
but yours is perfect. I'm in the exact situation you've described.
AMAZING POEM!! I hope you don't mind if I put it in my live journal
with your name at the bottom and everything!!! It's *so* great!!
Keep up the AWESOME work!! ^_^


Megan:

This is a really good poem, and I know a person that's goin through the same thing. Anyways just try 2 be happy b/c the world isn't that bad as it seems.


Erin:

I loved this poem
i felt like it was about me
i would love for everyone to be in my shoes
for just one day,
Im all by my self right now
i am always by my self
LOVE YOUR POEM
ERiN aka ERniE


Yanni:

I can relate to your poem it sums up just how i feel all the time
also what i try to let others see and understand.


JC:

I LOVE THIS POEM..SOMETHING I COULD RELATE TO..VERY GOOD


Ever:

Very lovely poem.


Evermore:

I've felt this lonely. Know how you feel


Martina Chen:

That poem is wonderful,it explains everything i've ever been feeling and shows that no one can understand the pain you've gone through or the stress you feel from you trying to explain it but they would truly understand if they only experienced your life for a min. i love that poem. After all the highest point in someones life can just be a dream


Spirit Adrift:

Jillian, Lovely poem !
shame though that a man named William Spencer
claims it as his writing.


Min Min:

The poem was submitted by Jillian H. But Jillian didn't leave a valid contact address. At that time Jillian titled the poem as "My world". I add the word "lonely" when I published the poem on this Website. So its more likely that William Spencer copied this poem from my Website because he used the new title I modified.


Karen:

This poem is kick ass i could totally relate to it


Jhnea:

This poem is just beautiful it shows passion and emotion great job!


Annie:

Hey is this the Jillianne Harris i know as a Grantsville
Middle school student if so why did you hide such
a talent for writing?


Nikki:

This is an awesome poem and i can relate to it completely, people to often judge others without realizing what they are going through. thank you for writing the poem!


Anwesha Ghosh:

Hi there Jillian,
Well, the poem is very good. It superbly expresses the solitude and pain of a loner. Keep up the good writing!
(I hope in real life, you are not such a loner!!...the world is not as bad as it seems!)
Anyway, happy writing!!"


Ashley:

This poem is actually really good, im gonna send it to my friends,and see wut they think


Star:

I've felt this way a thousand times before... and I've actually written a poem like this before...it's amazing...and if this is truly how you feel, I hope you'll find happiness someday in your life.


Balpreet:

thank you this is what i needed


Lydia:

I've never read a poem that relates to me so much.. i don't even think I've written one as close in relation to me as this...amazing job


Jessica Reed:

I just wanted to let you know,
I, too, have seen so many terrible things.
Im young, though my mind is not.
I've been through alot, and
would like to speak with you.
If you would, can you e-mail me?
I would very much like to talk with you.
Thank you


Ariana Alvarez:

Dear you,
your poem has such deep feelings.
your poem expresses tha way i've been feeling
all my life.. and im just happy to see that im not
the only one who feels this way in the world i
really appreciate you writing a poem like that..
-Ariana


GErAlDiNa tAmAyO:

God i love your poem i cried on this poem
it reminded me of my brother keep it up
L8rz


Lianna:

that's such a good poem.its exactly how i feel.


NIA:

Yes I feel your pain
great poem
wish someone could be in my shoes
right now cause Im lonely now


Lori Hoos:

What A great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Michelle:

Wow, as a poet myself, I can say that you are an excellent writer and that you deliver your pieces extremely well. Good for you, I hope to see more of your work soon. Keep your head high and smile. Feel free to email me, if you wish, for anything. Once again, excellent job.

~~Michelle


jillonda :

i loiked the poem i can relate. very nice work


Kim:

I really love your poem. I can really relate to it right now. Like someone else said, I hope you don't mind if I put it in my live journal, I will give you full credit of course!
Really great poem tho, I love it!!


Kaela:

I can relate in so many ways to this poem. You have an awsome talent. Also, thank you for making me realize that i'm not the only one who feels this way.


~*Brittany Ma.:

Wow! I really never thought that I'd find a poem so good.
One that describes Exactly how I feel.
Just want to say its a very wonderful poem.
And that you are very talented!


bobfakename:

i loveit, its... well somthing I'ven't seen in awhile
just keep doing what your doing.


Tanya Rosengren:

Wow... ummm.. This poem def. takes me straight into my life. This poem is everything about me.. EVERYTHING. I love it because it makes you think about how some people have to live everyday and how they just wake up every morning sometimes hoping they would die. That everyday they are mserable and covered in tears and that there past was so bad and the future is getting worse and there never seems like there is an end to it all. WOW


Amanda:

I love your poem, it relates alot to me I feel the same exact way sometimes, when my friends don't understand how I feel


Unknown:

Wow. That's really touching, and I
would like to see some more of you're work.


shawty:

Hey jillian...i was looking for a poem to express how i felt
and wen i came by yours it just ...well i felt exactly like that
and that's great..cuz it makes me feel like im not the only
one that feels this way...well just wanted to thenk you for
writing that poem..thank you again:D

~shawty~


Taylor :

Your poem really relates to me and I think it was really well written. I know exactly how you feel!


Hitler the great:

this excellent poem gave me hard on


Fionna:

your poem is mAD hOTz...i love writing poems too.....you write good tooZ!!


Laura:

That poem is beautiful, that's exactly how I feel.
I could never find words to express my thoughts
and feelings, until I read your poem.


Victoria:

that's such a wonderfull poem!Love it <333


Ashley:

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love that poem


steve:

i love this poem, it really speaks to me. It's as if the person who wrote it was writing about my life, not theirs.


dillian:

i thouhgt this poem was great, and its so true for a lot of people, especially people whos
feelings are never understood thank you for writting it. God Bless.


~Anna~:

OMG This poem is so about me there is so much going on in my life and ppl think that its not hard but its and when you feel down they try to help but it does not work... you did a really good job on this poem and i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


jackie:

that's an aweome poem so real n so deep.. i enjoyed readin it.
it brought tears to my eyes.. AMAZING


Malery:

hey i really like this poem of yours... your really good at what you do.... maybe you can tell me wat you think about my poems.... You're an inspiration dude! thank you for this poem…. It really touched me…. thank you for puttin down wat I've been feelin into words…. thank you!
<3 another poet admirer


breanna:

WoW... that's all i can say. You are a great writer
and you know how to express things in writing...
i wish i could do that. I love this poem. I'm going
through so much stuff in my life that no1!!! would
understand... family, friends... i know other people
go through the same thing, and it feels like hell
i hate it. I'm just lucky to have people in my life that
i can talk to. If you ever really need to talk about
anything, give me an email, it'd b nice to talk to
someone who feels as much pain as me.
~Bre~


Angel:

omg i SO love that poem. your a very talented writer. that poem is so true and expresses asum of the feelings I have.


rachelle:

heyyy love dis poem.. its reallii cool n awesome 2 keep up da good work=P


Amy:

Soo true.



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