Leasa:

That was a great ,moving poem!
i completely understand your emotions and feelings and its
obvious that your thought has been put into the poem.i loved it
leasa

Maria:

That poem was great and moving ...
i understand what your going through.
i wish i could put my thoughts and words
in to poems sometimes to make some of the
pain go away!
good job! I love it!!

Ally :

Omg... i love your poem.. its the 1 poem that i can describe what im goin through.. i don't think any1 couldve described my life better.. and if these are your true emotions i feel really bad for you cuz i know you feel... so again i just wanted to compliment you on your outstanding job on this poem!!

Brenda Crouse:

This poem is one of the most moving poems that I've ever read, I can relate to all of the words as well as the meaning behind it. After all Im a 16-year old and eveything seems to be moving so fast and the fast things arer my activities, friends and where I stand in the social crowd its as though I don't exist sometimes it's like every one is always angry and mad at me for some odd uncalled for reason that I myself had nothing to do with its crazy so in conclusion on a scale of 1-20 i would give this poem a 21 for being extra true and extra honest

Sunil:

Very good, I think that it sums up many people's feelings.

Unstable_Poet(Ales):

I cannot say that i know what you were going through
when you wrote that poem. Because like everyone
else i would say that without meaning. I can't say
that I liked the poem because i don't want to be like
everyone else and agree with it. I can say that I felt
somewhat close to this poem, in a strange way. I
also can say that it kept my attention unlike other
poems that i force myself to read. I also cannot say
that i should thank you for writing that poem, because
what you wrote was originally for your mind.
And even though my opinion doesn't matter,
unless you feel that the satisfaction of what people
think is what's best, I really enjoyed reading
something that i can relate to.

Leslie:

Good poem
Exactly what Im going through at work
thank you at least I know I may not be the
only one.

Nicole:

Wow.....if you could rip out all of the pain that i feel
inside and put in on paper
it woul be exactly what you have done
amazing poem
one you will never forget

C.S.:

This poem is excellent! i can really relate to it especially because of whats going on in my life right now! never stop writing...one day i bet you're gonna be known! good luck

kelsey petersen:

this poem describes everything im going through and I love it..sorryso short I duno what to say

margaret:

my god sweet angel,i wish i was there to give you a big fat hug.my prayers are w/u baby.sign;A MOM

jennifer:

its hard not to be able to break lose.i hope that maybe someday we will all be able to find ourselves among all the others and that maybe we will be able to be happy even though right now we are going through hell.i hope that this expierence will make us feel tronger. I hope that you can brake free from all of this pain

Danielle:

i didn't like this "poem" at all it didn't make sense,
and the bloodiness was taking it a bit too far.
All it sounds like is an emo trying to get attention.

sierra:

danielle sux! what r you a prep.......by th way sarah who? from lousiana?

Jeanine:

This poem describes my life perfectly!! This poem is wonderful and well written.

London:

I love it !!! its sooooo sad just keep your hopes up and ask God for help!!! He will listen and make everything turn out for the better!!!

Brian:

Invade my soul. Blissfully make my bleeding heart once again whole. Take my shaking hands in yours. Kiss my intimate lips and make them live once more. sweet poisen from your infectious kiss runs through my veins. My eyes only beg for the sight of you once more. I live to run my fingers through your hair. Sove me now for Im a wilting rose waiting for your touch and beauty to bring me back to life. My patience kills me more and more every day. I want to reach out and touch your face. But you will never know how I really feel for I want to want to want no longer. But if you will I will want you because you are the most normal person I've felt in many many years.

mercedes:

this poem seems very relative to me …I love it!!! Keep up the writing!!!!

kristi:

that's a good poem

Zainab:

i honestly think that this poem rocked!!!

Lindsay:

Wow...I can relate to this. I felt so alone until I read this poem.
Great job.

Britni:

just wanted to say , i like your poem an i don't know if you wrote it because it was how you felt or because you were just writing but that's how im feelin at this point. i like your writing.

sam:

hiii sarah its really kool that you can write such
words cherish this gift for the rest
of yur life you may not no me
but trust me :>

ally a.:

i really like your poem
whene i was reading it. It
reminds me of my baby sis
that i love so much and becouse of your poem
know i understend what she maybe going through
ever day
all i want to tell you as well as my
baby sis is that god is and well always
be with you men god bless you. know your not along
any more

Katii:

wow that was deep..... it made me cry..
i feel like that 24/7..
thank you for this poem..
i loved it will all my heart.
even tho you might b e sad sometimes. someone out there will
always love you. trust me.
i know..

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