Min Min:

That's the imperfection.

Brittany:

That poem was well written and it had a nice rhyme scheme

Stephanie:

The poem is interesting and it also touched my heart.
Great poem,keep it poem.

Rolanda Browne:

i think this poems is very good and interesting it had a great rymth stlyle. Well its 1 of the best poems I've ever read.

Jami :

WOW you have no idea how true this poem is for me! I just got out of a friendship that I thought would never end but come to find out she was bad mouthing me and I asked her about it and she just said that she never said that but i knew that she was lying to me b/c i read w/ my own eyes! I was so upset and now she won't talk to me about it b/c she doesn't want to fight about it and its sad! That's what I had to say hope you liked it! It was a great poem!

Lissett :

i just want to give props to Lameese Carmenar because that poem is so true. sometimes i just think that there is no such thing as a true friendship .

Bianca:

I love this peom. My life feels like a moivie all the time, I never know what is gonna happen!

sarah:

Really nice peom

amber :

u know you did good on this hahahahah

The Person:

this poem stinks! i wanted a happy poem not
"this friendships gonna end" crap! Make a happyier
poem andI will b happier!

Donnell:

It was really good!!!

Victoria:

Haha I think this is the cuteest poem.
Also, It's kinda like a rap.
I LOVE IT

*Cutiee PA-TUTTI*

Crystal:

It was Very cute.
I really LOVED it

Sarah:

To be honest, I don't really like this poem. It's so negative and so dull.
There's a good source of words you wrote that fit in with this poem, but the way
you said that friendships always end is what I don't get.
I'm a poet myself and I'll admit, I've written some negetive stuff, but stuff like saying
friendships always end is not that apatizing. And not inspiring for viewers to read.

Rebecca:

Its true but not true sumtyms...But most of the time its true....

tasha:

omg i love this poems it almost sounds as if its a
its so good i love the part were at the end all the
words rymed

javen:

This poem really touched me it made me
understand that some friends aren't really
worth wating for that you shouldlet them go

Jennifer :

WOW!TATS GREAT GOOD LUCK KEEP IT GOING ON

bianka:

i really loved this poem can you email me and we can talk about it

(Navy):

dat's wuzzup. i'm diggin da lil flow you had going wit yo ol' punk as$ lil b*tch as$ mafucka...lol

Navy:

whats good shorty? nice poem....i give it a encore, do you want more. holla atcha manall day

marykay:

this poem relates to me in so many ways its not even funny its such a good poem and its true what the poem says so the person who wrote it you did a good job writing it

chonta:

this was a great poem and keep writing

Brenna Taylor :

LOVE THIS POEM IT ROCKS THE BEST OF THE ALL

ice:

i like this poem because i went thro sumthang just like it and is true sum friendships will end

helixe:

Hi Author.....
don't write a poem that can discourage people or
it can create a negative idea into a person... please
write a happy poem... but your poem is a nice one..

keep up....

dazzler:

i agree wid 'sarah" and 'helixe" dat it shud inspire d readers...
buh yeh you wanted to xpress your feelings and datz wat you cud think about.
writing a perfect poem includes putting up d rite feelings and thoughts..
m sure you wud get wat i mean :)
u have written a ralli nyce poem, i loveed it ^_^
keep it up !!
and dun forget to be correct in yoh lyf!

jamie:

this poem sounds great i love it

SONIA:

THIS IS VERY GOOD POEM I WISH EVERYBODY WROTE THIS POEM AS I DO thank you AND LOVE you men

raven:

YOU KNOW I PERSONNALY BELEive EVERY WORD IN THIS PATICULAR POEM, YOU THINK YOU CAN T RUST A FRIEND WHEN IN REALITY THERE ALL RATTLESNAKE, TURN AROUND AND BITE YOU..

siziar:

kind love it

aman:

omg, dis is really touching and i just love it!!
keep writing more!!

sandy:

the poems are nice but too long.i can give three stars for this poem.

jit:

its a very nice poem. try to do a rap out of it

la locs:

I totally agree with it ...nice

Jameka Earle:

OMG!!!!
that poem is so goooooooooooooood!
its so hard for me to put it in words!!

cutiejoy:

oh. . .its so good. . .ur poem is so real. .i really like it. . .u have such a nice imagination. .

eChA:

it's is a nice poem...
and i never heard any poem
like this before...
hope you can do better than
this next time...

kayla:

great poem really liked it!!!

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