Min Min:

Very touching. So love is very natural. It will not change because you are loved so much. When love gets return then its called "thankfulness". I guess the greatest people are those who live with those they don't love but they are loved and make who love and live with them happy. The other greatest people are those who are willing to make their beloved one happy if their beloved one chose someone else and live happily. If you are not loved by your beloved one then you cannot really make your beloved one happy. If your beloved one is not happy with someone else it does not mean your beloved one will definitely be happy with you. He/she could be happier with someone else than you could notice from surface. He/she could be happy when he/she is suffering who knows. When we talk about "loving someone who deserves" we are actually talking about "thankfulness". So love is not definitely greater than "thankfulness". All what I want to say is: take it easy.

Rony:

Nice poem dude. i feel you

CYNTHIA:

THIS IS TO THE AUTHOR:
I JUST FOUND THIS WEBSITE AND I've READ TWO OF YOUR POEMS SO FAR AND I THINK THEY ARE SO BEAUTIFUL. I BELIEVE WE ARE GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING RIGHT KNOW. YOU HAVE REALLY CHEERED ME UP AND HAVE MADE ME CRY ALL AT THE SAME TIME. I REALLY HOPE SHE FINDS OUT THE WONDERFUL man SHE LOST. GOOD LUCK!

cecilia:

baby mani wish there were more men like you in this world!!!

Becky:

This is one of my fave poems because it gives so much love
and beauty in it i love this poem nice job on it

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