Andrew:

Your poem could do without these lines
will no longer exist.
I lost him,he's no more,
The only thing that's left,
is his deteriorating soul.
Poorly crafted.

*Starr*:

I like it. Very good.

angelica:

like it!

vanessa:

andrew, I've read alot of your comments
on different poems and there all mean and horrible.
don't listen to him. this poem was terrific and i loved it
great job

Eunice:

This poem was so beautiful because it relates to what happened to me. I love this poem!

angel:

i love dis poem it made me think about my love for my ex even though
he didn't die it felt like he have.

johanna brown:

i love dis poem but i cannot help da fact that i think that im starting 2 fall in love again cannot hide dis feeling from no one the poem that you wrote is like the way i feel i hope dat im not digging to my own grave i know that i will never stop loving again.

l0vely:

♥ w0www!! i reAlly l0v dz p0em.. ♥
♥ fantastic! itz s0 sad n true.. ♥

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