Amy:

Really nice. Not many people get the meaning of being in another person or things place and speaking through poetry of their feelings, but I know exactly how its.

la smily:

i love sad poems and I like yours
do you think you can make
one of me and my man salud
if you can please mail me thank you
-bye-

Dominique:

Jones, I would like to first say your poems shows
shows good expression on your topic. yet the
understanding of what your really tring to express
is not put in a more understanding way. we want
to feel what your tring to say.

heimee:

your poem is really ( 100x) nice and always rhymes
but can you make a poem for a two friend that will
already be part to one another when at this time
they are already both angry to each other but
before they are best friends? please....

Lulu:

I had just lost a close friend of mine, he commited suicide.
And the last two verses made me realise, that he is
still around me.
Even though I can't see him.
To the author of this poem.
thank you.

monica:

you have strong feelings and i think its good you keep it open in to poems so you should keep it up cuz i love reading them thank you and Im a poem writer my self and you inspire me to write more and more
good luck in lfe goodbye *

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