Kely Velasco:

Hey don't do something you are later gonna regret
trust me i know exactly how you feel. it's a
really bad feeling . i feel like that all the time but
running away isn't gonna get all the problems to
go away. don't lie to yourself telling yourself
that you're nothing you are so stop doing that to
yourself alright peace outz!!!!!!

Kellie:

Hi, i understand how you feel i feel that way to but i do
take the time to cry myself to sleep b/c it helps me
the next day! even though i don't know you and i don't
know how bad your feelings are i just want to say
that you will make it through and 1 day you will show
your friends and family that you can make
something out of yourself and i'm only 13 and i've
been through alot of stuff that most people wouldn't
have known and everything will be alright if you just be
yourself!!

Leslie.H.:

i relly like this poem is a good poem and i know what shet going through.

Christina:

That was a very good poem. Keep up the good work. Your very talented

Brenna:

Hey I can really relate to what you're going through. Your poem is absolutely AMAZING and you obviously have a lot of talent.

Nicole:

i reckon this poem is very touching. i can relate to this poem because Im goin through the same sort of thing. this poem is great.

Taylor:

i understand, I get screamed at for not understanding, never being able to show my point of view and afraid to expose my tears. you're locked inside your fears and I understand that.

Barbara:

I love your poem! I can relate to it because I get yelled at by people (especially family) for not doing stuff right, not understanding, and I can never figure out how to express my opinions to other people verbally and I won't let myself cry in front of people so I go lock myself in my room and write poems, think, listen to music, draw pictures, and cry. Crying makes me feel better cause I let some of how I feel out and I feel less worthless.

Ms.Hayes:

This is creative but depressing

raven:

wow! when i read this it got my attention big time becuz i feel the same way.i like this one a lot.

KELLIE:

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM its THE BOM.......
YOU KNOW WHAT I REALLY don't LIKE IT
IS STUPIED SO SHUT UP
IM USING IT FOR MY L.A CLASS ASSINMENT

shibby:

That was very good work and i under that what the
poem is trying to say to the people that are reading
it.

hallowd be thy name:

wow you did a awsome job on this one i can realy relate its very touching.

April:

i likes your poetry

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