Brian Conners:

This is a beautiful poem and i wish I could
find more like it thank you for posting it. If you
have any more please post them or mail
them to me. I hope you are not writing about
yourself because I know what those kinds of
thoughts are like and it hurts so bad just to go on
but the way I found to keep on going is to
hep other people. It just makes the pain
go away for a while and it allow s you to feel good
about yourself for a while.
thank you again
Brian

al:

Fabulous poetry, really emotive. Many share and have shared the feeling but
this poem says it all so succinctly and so sweet ly -well done. :o) …………brings to mind an old limerick I once heard:


'Tis hard to be human it's true,
for most such thoughts are not new,
but if in our despair
we unload what we bear
the powerful becomes what is you

Karla:

hey girl i hav a poem 4 you....
i RARELY write optimistic poems
this is one of my few
so i hope it bebefits you......:

~Anthem of MY Dieing Day~
On the mossy grass of green
sitting in the shadows alone
The smell of Jasmine’s keen
such peace shall never be overthrown
Why!? Cries the wind through the trees
Whoosh through my hair goes the breeze
Up and around masses of hills
suddenly it comes to a stop
and the rest of the day stands still
I look and see the sun is blocked
then a moment became
of just me and the bird
Now the glowing magma of sun
is leaving me
to shine his mighty light on another lonely one
The darkness creeping in at last
my life is now just one big past
Six feet down
I’m gonna go
But not just yet
for the stars now show
I see my life with no regret
for I kept on living in times of fret
I kept on growing
though so many opposing
I kept on dreaming
throughout all the unbelieving
Helped all those I could help
Unto the King himself I knelt
Some nights troubled that I won’t forget
when sleep I couldn’t get
and all night to the pillow wept
All the secrets, troubles, and lies I kept
then the promise of tomorrow soon left
But gladly that season came and went
The thought to take away the truth
came as such a potent tempt
But I went on
bold and strong
until today
the day I recall it all
remember the days
that I was so glad I kept on going
and on the days I thought of it again
I would live the days
that made my life worth living
and the faith would come back
So I went on giving and giving
Lived my life strong winning and winning
Until today where my life stops continuing
But it was all worth it from the beginning
The end is near
But I made a difference
I've no fear
For you I pray deliverance
I’m on last gear
All my dreams have come true
The end is here
I love you.
KXZ(KAR)

candice :

hey ..... this poem is great . I understnad what
you are saying.... continue to write you
have a gift.... good luck and i hope you
find endless love
signed
candice

MARIBELLES:

THIS IS ONE NICE POEM. SOMEHOW I FEEL LIKE IT WAS WROTE FOR ME. GOOD JOB!

stephanie garcia:

hey i loved that poem because I wrote
my man salud one kind of like that
he told me not to think like that because
he loved me we have 1year together
and his planing a family his crazy but hothis my only love
well e-mail me so we can make r poems together.

donna:

There's a lot more than you know to love………

Stephanie:

This poem is very nice to hear when you pronounce
it correctly.The poem also sounds sad when I read it.

Heliana Stephanie:

The poem sounds nice and lovely.I like to hear more from
the author.When I read the poem,I've half feeling.
I've sad feelings and happy feelings because of the poem.I
It sounds great...keep up the good work.

bigi:

there is only 1 word that comes to mind when describing this poem "beautifull" if you are writing this
about your self well i no what kind of pain you are in because Im in the same right at this moment
"beautifull"

gaby101:

"WOW!"I KNOW HOW IT FEELS BECUZ I
WENT THREW THE SAME THING I WANTED
TO DIE JUST BECUZ I CHANGED SKOOLS

KAT:

THIS POEM WAS SO DEEP AND INTENSE. YOUR A REALLY GREAT POET AND I HOPE THAT A LOT MORE PEOPLE GET TO HEAR THEIS POEM BECAUSE IT REALLY MAKES YOU THINK ABOUT THE LAST WORDS YOU SAY TO SOME BODY thank you IT MAKE ME VALUE THE THINGS I've A LOT MORE!
LOVE IT TONS!!:)

Pooja:

U 'no smthng, i likd d poem. nt rlly strikng bt wht i feel its d lst mmt emotion..
keep it up..
wishing you luck forever...

kimberly:

i love these poems the ppl that have wrote them sure do have lots in common w me so if you like hit me up so we could talk i2c0p04@ yahoo or on aim goodbye love pumpkin

ashley:

that's the best poem i ever saw think you for helping me love will make you do things you ever would do!!

Baby Minnie:

that's so cute i already have the person to who i will dedicate that to i almost started crying. I LOVED IT!!!!!

Alyssa Kimball:

hey this poem is great i can realate to it because i feel like that all the time it SUCKS but always think twice call me if you ever need to talk 956-541-5054 or956-639-6845
love alwas alyssa Kimball

angie:

hi...in all your poems it seems that your hurting..i want
to tell you that it's not the end of the world if something
wrong happens..think of it this way..it hurts but what
do i compare this pain for...there's people out there that
need to be crying but they aren't and basically not
thinking of dying...give your carries to God...let him
be your shelter open your heart to him and see this
heaviness leave from your heart...he die for us..being
sinners and didn't cry over why me...but instead he
die gladly for us because he loves us...stop thinking
so negative..be glad this things happen because
they happen for a reason..n for better

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