renee:

your poem isnt all that good you should try writting about better thing than that its just not something i would want to read kay thank you for listening 2 my comment babes

thrishana heaven :

I THINK IT'S A GREAT POEM BECAUSE I COULD RELATE TO IT AND I'M HAPPY SOMEONE WROTE SOMETHING ABOUT THIS BECAUSE IT SOMETHING THAT SEEM TO HAPPENED ALOT NOT JUST TO ME BUT TO ALOT OF PEOPL E I KNOW AND DON'T REALLY KNOW THAT MUCH SO MY COMMENT I S THAT IT A GREAT POEM AND I LIKED IT ALOT .

emily:

hey elliott,
My name is emily and i really like your poem,
because im a film student at a high school, and
an assignment i had was to get a poem and write
basically a short poem and all this
then film it and my first poem glorified marijuana
and my teacher was gona take of on letter grade
so I said I was gona , basically im gonna use your
poem for my short film because im gonna shot
it good, if you wana hear whatI will film e-mail me

jen:

This poem reminds me of what one of my friend who has
gone thru with someone who left our town for some-
thing she couldn't control she found out that there
was nothing better but it was too late so anyway that
was beautiful thank you for that!
keep on writing

beauty:

i like the thought or the message of your poem.. but there's something wrong wtih your delivery.. I think you have poor choice of words. try expanding your vocabulary so you could write a better one and so that you could express yourself in a better way

Shary:

yeah I think this poem is good I couldn't wwrite anything better

Elizabeth :

i think your poam was great!!keep it up,don't worry wat anyone says is a great peice of art!!~1~

Hollimer:

this is an incredible poem. i really enjoyed reading it- you sure can rhyme!:)

Giana Rosa:

i love the poem.
i really love the poem because i understand
that you trying to say.
i also write poem.

Mariela Martinez:

The poems are to long and they are nice.

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